Why did I choose electrical engineering to be my major ,
because my uncle told me to select electrical engineering
is the good choose at junior high school ,
it can helps me easy to find the job in the society ,
thereupon I trod electrical engineering this road .
Just started I possibly regarding the specialized subject a little unfamiliar ,
but along with time past ,
own specialized knowledge also more accumulated more much .
Finally I also have the interest to the electrical engineering .
Slowly , I will quickly graduated ,
hope later when I employment is a calm and steady work .
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1.Topic sentence : Why did I choose electrical engineering to be my major
2. A.容易找到工作
4.在support上可以在多幾個
6.在組織上是由過去寫到將來
8.主題是為什麼選此科系,因此可以再針對一些此科系優點或是未來發展來做一些補充,來做為支持所選科系的理由.
1.Topic sentence : Why did I choose electrical engineering to be my major.
2.選擇電機工程的原因
a.他舅舅叫他選擇電機工程
b.出社會工作比較好找
3.感覺文章的結果句子比較不通順.
4.沒有提到"為什麼"後來喜歡上電機工程的原因,是因為接觸某些科目嗎?是否可以提出例子.
5.YES!
6.建議是不是要加上為什麼後來喜歡電機工程的原因,以及之後打算朝往那方面發展.
8.再簡述一下在唸書期間,因為什麼原因才開始對電機工程感興趣.
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