I like living at home because I do not worry about the four essential requirements of the people .
For example , living at home has some advantages , like a relaxing learning environment 、a self-paced learning and cost cheaper .
Sometimes living in the dormitory has some advantages . Unlike living at home , in the dormitory has better interaction with peers . Most important of all , when I have Schoolwork questions , I can quickly get the answer in the dormitory .
Living at home not only a safer environment but also build good interaction with family finally.
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1.I like living at home
2.分別針對雙方的優缺點來書寫。
3.yes
4.(1)住家裡可以有比較放鬆的學習環境，
花費也比較小、有自我的私人空間。
(2)住宿舍有課業問題可以比較快速的找
到答案。
6.在說明上可以在更深入一些。
7.可以分別對相同的方面做一些比較。
9.可以對於書寫的論點再做一些更詳細的探
討。
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1.I like living at home because I do not worry about the four essential requirements of the people.
2.有提出各項優缺點沒錯,但是沒有深入的說明.
3.多舉一點實例來說明為什麼說是優、缺點.
4.
a.living at home has some advantages:like a relaxing learning environment 、a self-paced learning and cost cheaper .
b.living in the dormitory has some advantages:in the dormitory has better interaction with peers . Most important of all , when I have Schoolwork questions , I can quickly get the answer in the dormitory .
5.YES
6.優缺點的方面在舉點例子.
7.加入例子後,可能需要再注意組織好的完整性.
8.目前沒有,因為沒有介紹到實例.
9.再舉一點例子
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