The MP3 has made my lives more convenient
because I can listen to the music in anytime and anywhere .
The advantages of a MP3:
First , if I want to listen to the music , I do not need a CD player .
Second , it can treat a USB when I need to save something .
Third, it is very ethereal and easy to carry .
Fourth , it is very cheap .
Finally , it is to benefit everyone for the invention of MP3 . MP3 continuous innovation and already has MP4 now . So MP3 is not only displaces the CD player but also let me listen to the music in anywhere and anytime .
1 則留言:
1.The MP3 has made my lives more convenient because I can listen to the music in anytime and anywhere .
2.Yes
3.Yes, the support in the paragraphs support the topic sentences.
4.No, I think you can get more details about the effects of MP3.
5.The first paragraph : The MP3 has made my lives more convenient
because I can listen to the music in anytime and anywhere.
6.I really want to know more about the second paragraph. If you can get more examples, I think that will get better.
7.Yes.
8.That is fine.
9.You can get more your paragraphs that will get better.
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